Looks pretty good but truth be told I perfer the origional. I really do think it has something to do with our contrasting monitors. What looks good on mine probably looks poor on yours. Your revision is well done but it now appears a little blurred and smudged. The text now has a very light edging to it. This is no fault of your own and I have no doubt that it looks easily superior on your rig but on my end this is what it appears like.