I think it's pretty cool myself but instead of having the blue content end abruptly I'd have it fade out, just vary opacity as it continues so it looks smooth perhaps. And the letters are a little unfinished looking. Don't get too fancy but if it merged with the background a little more it may look better, try different blending techniques like screen or lighten (that might look like crap but fool around with it). Layer effects wouldn't hurt either but just keep it readable. Otherwise good work