I am not able to understand your picture correctly due to the fact its very messy... Anyways just wanna make sure that you have done this....
1. Cable selection.
IDE Cable
:----------:---:
MC-------SC---PC
MC=Main/mobo COnnector, SC=Secondary connector, PC = Primary Connector.
HD1 = Primary (Which includes your windows)
HD2 = Extra Storage....
Connect PC with HD1 and SC with HD2.
Then your Jumpers....
[::::] This is how your jumper pins are....
if [|:::] jumper on the first two pins, Master.
or [:|::] Jumper on the second two pins, secondary.
Just check them and reply back if it doesnt solves your problem....